After the drums kick in, it really isn't that bad
The guitar sound is really raw, but not in a desirable way (for me and these are my only my tastes). Perhaps, the treble is overpowering everything else, but I just feel that the sound is a little sound is a little too tinny. That and the amp sound when you're not playing guitar is a bit like "Ewwww, I you're guitar amp's pants have a hole in it." Again totally a matter of personal taste.
Nice drum work. They sound like real, fucking studio drums. That's an accomplishment with anything you're using (midi, drum machine midi, or actual drums). I especially love the drum rolls. This is a legit Pop Punk Song. Or it is turning out to be. I'll actually have to listen to the finished version of this, because the arranging in this well done. With a little polishing this would not be out of place with anything else kids are bopping to these day over the radio waves.
Nice job man.