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Most of it sounded fine

The vocals were hyper distorted, and I don't know if your mic sucks so bad or you love after-effects. Usually if you EQ crappy microphones correctly, you can't make it sound somewhat decent. I don't know how you would EQ your stuff though because I don't know what it sounds like dry.

Only one word of advice on your arrangement (which is well done), after the computer voice you have some type of distorted guitar midi-instrument. Guitar midi is the worst because it always is the easiest to sit back and say "THAT'S MIDI!" When I heard the guitar instrument, I thought "OH GOD, CHEESY MIDI." If you can distort regular midi instruments, I would recommend trying to distort a keyboard sound or a synth, because those usually turn out alright.

This Song is Midi-Tacular

This makes daily tasks so much more epic while listening to it. You sir, know how to arrange. The only thing this lacks is an actual melody with development, though you clearly have a motif.

However, don't get me wrong, this is great background music. I wish you luck in finding someone to use it, because it is begging to background music so bad.

Vocals a bit too busy

The original song is good enough to stand on its own. You don't to have to change anything about let alone improvise the entire melody (for the first half). How am I supposed to sing along to this? I don't really hear the original at all in these vocals (save for the end), though you did a nice job of making the instrumental sound really vintage. The vocals stick out like a sore thumb mixing wise.

I can't believe my Ears

The production value on this song is amazing. I can't believe that this is on NG. I love the saxophone sound. I hope it the saxophone isn't sampled, because then I would feel that my experience was slightly cheapened. Either way though, this amazing.

Moar Cowbell

I wish the drums didn't match-up as well as they did against the flute. It would have been more musical lulzy to hear hardcore drums or a heavy rap beat over the flute. I don't know if I can attribute the flute to you, but it was catchy.

Surprising in Spite of Table

I never expected this from a title so incredibly stupid. However, this was done extremely well done. I love the production. The only pet peeves are the introduction and there is no punch-line to your lyrics. I'm kind of unsure what this was about after listening to it twice, nor is there anything memorable in the lyrics themselves. But nice track.

mseemercury responds:

well the thing is that if you dont know anything of the beef im having with this kid named rackoon who is also a ng user then you wouldnt understand it but i appreciate the review though thx alot

I write songs.

ExJohn @Bobomatic

Age 33, Male

Songwriter

Loyola University

U.S.A.

Joined on 6/3/09

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